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ALAN AND MARILYN BERGMAN ON SONGWRITING: PART 2

The following is excerpted from the Bergmans' guest spot at the ASCAP Extended Songwriters' Workshop, held in November, 1996. It appears in three installments.

"When we hear a melody,
we feel that there are words on the tips of those notes,
and we have to find them."

Q: Did you ever write lyrics without any music?

MB: Sure. We prefer not to, though. We find that with lyrics, written first -- the rhythmic patterns aren't that interesting, that we tend to write in kind of predictable patterns. Composers come up with much more interesting rhythmic structures and patterns than we do by ourselves. Sometimes we'll write a lyric to a melody, and then for one reason or another, the lyric and the music will get a divorce [laughter]. We will then have a lyric that we'll give to another composer -- although we never play them the original -- and it's an entirely different reading of the lyric. It's very interesting.

Recently a songwriter said to me that in your career, you can be a great songwriter or you can be a hit songwriter. Do you feel that there is a difference, and do you agree or disagree?

AB: There is a difference. I'm not making any value judgments, but I think what he means is, for the most part, hits today are often hits for two weeks, and then you never hear them again. I think a lot of people end up making a hit record instead of a hit song; in that case, if you take the technology out, what you're left with is the bare bones of the music and the lyrics, and if that can stand on its own, -- a standard, a song -- that can last. I'm not accusing anybody in this room, but unfortunately, many of the people who want to be songwriters today, for some reason, don't have a sense of history. If you talk to film students, they've seen and know films since Edison invented the movie camera. That's true of artists, novelists -- they understand their history. We find that most songwriters don't know their history, are not conversant with Johnny Mercer, Rodgers and Hammerstein, Lerner and Lowe, Jerome Kern, the Gershwins, and in order to bridge the gap between pop and standards, you have to know what happened before. I think that's very important. We were lucky: when we were growing up, those writers were our teachers. We used to go the theatre. We couldn't afford it, Marilyn and I found out that we used to do the same things when we were kids --

MB: We used to sneak in with the intermission crowd and see the second act of every show. Now we find that we sometimes leave after a lot of first acts! [laughter] I also think there is a difference between a hit record and a great song, and I think maybe that's what was implied. There are certainly hit songwriters who are great songwriters. And it's true, architects still study the [Roman] Coliseum. There's an aesthetic that still speaks to people thousands of years later.

How did the song "Windmills Of Your Mind" come about?

MB: That was an assignment, for a picture called The Thomas Crown Affair. It was a picture about a very wealthy playboy who has been everywhere and done everything, and for a thrill, plans a very complicated bank heist. There was a scene in which he is flying a glider for pleasure while he's planning the bank heist, and the director shot six- or seven-minutes of him circling in the glider -- which is a dream for a songwriter: no dialogue, no sound effects, just a little shoosh of wind. Norman Jewison, the director, wanted a song that exposed no character, that didn't tell any plot -- he just wanted the restlessness and uneasiness of the character underlined. Michel wrote six or seven full melodies, and when we work with him, we write to his melodies, because even though he expresses himself perfectly in English, his French accent is such that things can come out sounding a little like calypso songs! He played us these wonderful melodies, and we agreed to sleep on it. The next morning all three of us had independently chosen this oddball melody, almost baroque in feel. It was the opposite of what we had thought we would have chosen the night before.

AB: I think we chose it because it's kind of a ribbon, a circular melody that reflected the flight of a glider very well.

MB: And it reminded us of those moments when you're trying to fall asleep and you can't turn your mind off. Anxiety is circular, actually.

Do you find that the restrictions of writing for a film are another way of releasing creativity? For 32-bar form, you have to write a great melody for it to work.

MB: There are a lot of lousy songs with 32-bar form! I'm not saying that you can't write a great song in 32-bar form, but a lot of those old songs now sound like miniatures to me, because we're so accustomed to extended forms. We like the restraints that a movie puts up, where you have to write for a particular character or mood, and you have to begin at Frame A and be out by Frame X, and you've got to be right in that slot, and you don't want to repeat the images that are on the screen, and you don't want to reinvent anything that the screenwriter is saying, or that the camera is showing you. Usually you come in after the picture is shot, and you have to weave your way into the tapestry of that film as if you were there from the beginning. Those challenges are the ones that we love.

And when you don't have those challenges?

MB: It's tough.

Do you find that there are certain subjects that keep coming back when you're writing within those constraints?

AB: I don't know about subjects, but there are images that we come back to. There was a long period where -- we didn't realize it, but someone asked, "Would you please write a song without a season in it?" And we didn't realize that there were images of seasons in a lot of our songs. But that's called style, I guess. For us it's the melody. When we hear a melody, we feel that there are words on the tips of those notes, and we have to find them.

MB: It's like Michelangelo talked about a block of marble -- he said, "The form is in there, I just have to chip away at the stone until I release it."

AB: And if you've ever seen unfinished Michelangelo, the figures are just straining to come out.

What are your main sources of inspiration?

"When I'm really stuck and feeling stupid, and feel that there are no more words anymore, and everything has been said, and everything has been said better -- I'll read. ... For every word you write, read a thousand."

MB: It's the film, usually. And when we don't have that, sometimes it's very difficult. When it's just a melody, even a melody that we adore, we'll sit down and have a whole world of ideas to pick from, but no particular direction.

AB: You have to be a reader in order to be a writer, and we read a lot.

MB: When I'm really stuck and feeling stupid, and feel that there are no more words anymore, and everything has been said, and everything has been said better -- I'll read.

AB: There's wonderful story about writing. Richard Brooks is a wonderful director/writer who wrote and directed Elmer Gantry, The Professionals, In Cold Blood. We worked with him on a picture called The Happy Ending -- we wrote "What Are You Doing For The Rest Of Your Life" for that picture. He was a product of the Depression, and when he was 15 or 16 years old, he went on the rails from city to city, and he'd get off and try to write a story for the local newspaper for five dollars, and then go on. And one night he was in a typical hobo camp, sitting around with a can of soup, and a man said, "Hey kid, what do you do?" He said, "I'm a writer." The man said, "Have you ever read Dostoyevsky? Tolstoy? Nietzsche? Let me tell you something: for every word you write, read a thousand." So we read a lot: it stimulates writing.

MB: Before anyone hired us, we used to take a scene from a play or a book, or a story from a newspaper, and make believe that it was an assignment. We wrote a lot of songs as exercises, because it was ten years before anybody would give us a movie. We wrote a lot of childrens' songs during that period to pay the rent. They were all exercises that came from reading that proved very helpful later.

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